pajama party.

2011-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I am going to be in pajama party with my high school juniors on saturday night in Seoul. And we planned to watch a musical 'Legally Blonde' on saturday. At first I was worried about that wheter or not my boyfreind mind that. Because we spent toghether every weekend. But fortunately he was cool he told me " I know your friends are nice so take care honey~" Sometimes some women choose their boyfriend when they are in between women freinds and boyfreind. It is hard to balance freindship and love. I had a tendency of following my friends before instead of boyfreind. But nowdays I follow my boyfriend because it is time to select my spause and other girls are same. Well coming weekend will be ,as it were, a free day for me entirely.

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Hi J!! Wow pajama party. I've never been to one this past few years, the last time attended this kind of party was 6 years ago. I suddenly miss the old times. Well I hope you'll have fun. Take care okay!! See you on Monday!! Lei J   I am going to be in pajama party with my high school juniors on saturday night in Seoul. >>I am going to attend a pajama party with my high school juniors on Saturday night. And we planned to watch a musical 'Legally Blonde' on saturday. >>correct At first I was worried about that wheter or not my boyfreind mind that. >>At first, I was worried whether my boyfriend will mind it or not. Because we spent toghether every weekend. >>Because we always spend the weekend together. But fortunately he was cool he told me " I know your friends are nice so take care honey~" >>correct Sometimes some women choose their boyfriend when they are in between women freinds and boyfreind. >>Sometimes, women need to choose between their friends and boyfriend. It is hard to balance freindship and love. >>correct I had a tendency of following my friends before instead of boyfreind. >>I have the tendency to prioritize my friends before my boyfriend. But nowdays I follow my boyfriend because it is time to select my spouse and other girls do the same. >>correct Well coming weekend will be ,as it were, a free day for me entirely. >>Well, this coming weekend will be, as it is, a entirely free day for me.

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