pajama party.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am going to be in pajama party with my high school juniors
on saturday night in Seoul.
And we planned to watch a musical 'Legally Blonde' on saturday.
At first I was worried about that wheter or not my boyfreind
mind that.
Because we spent toghether every weekend.
But fortunately he was cool he told me " I know your friends are nice
so take care honey~"
Sometimes some women choose their boyfriend when they are in between
women freinds and boyfreind.
It is hard to balance freindship and love.
I had a tendency of following my friends before instead of boyfreind.
But nowdays I follow my boyfriend because it is time to select my
spause and other girls are same.
Well coming weekend will be ,as it were, a free day for me entirely.
강사 첨삭
Hi J!! Wow pajama party. I've never been to one this past few years, the last time attended this kind of party was 6 years ago. I suddenly miss the old times. Well I hope you'll have fun. Take care okay!! See you on Monday!!
Lei J
I am going to be in pajama party with my high school juniors on saturday night in Seoul.
>>I am going to attend a pajama party with my high school juniors on Saturday night.
And we planned to watch a musical 'Legally Blonde' on saturday.
>>correct
At first I was worried about that wheter or not my boyfreind mind that.
>>At first, I was worried whether my boyfriend will mind it or not.
Because we spent toghether every weekend.
>>Because we always spend the weekend together.
But fortunately he was cool he told me " I know your friends are nice so take care honey~"
>>correct
Sometimes some women choose their boyfriend when they are in between women freinds and boyfreind.
>>Sometimes, women need to choose between their friends and boyfriend.
It is hard to balance freindship and love.
>>correct
I had a tendency of following my friends before instead of boyfreind.
>>I have the tendency to prioritize my friends before my boyfriend.
But nowdays I follow my boyfriend because it is time to select my spouse and other girls do the same.
>>correct
Well coming weekend will be ,as it were, a free day for me entirely.
>>Well, this coming weekend will be, as it is, a entirely free day for me.
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