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2012-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I have a lab seminar tomorrow for paper review only in English. So I had stayed all night and I didn't have a time to take your call. Sorry about it. I am also writing this contents during business trip. I think that smart phone is the best masterpiece because it is very useful and comprtable everywhere. I went to business trip with my professor. He said with his smile, "Sometimes take care when you study.", and commented additionally, "Study burning midnight oil. I also burn the midnight oil." His comments were all right but it is paradox. Anyway I am in the internet with my smart phone. I am happy to be able to do internet outside.

강사 첨삭

Good day! Its really amazing how gadgets are bieng invented these days. It makes life easier, I hope that everything will turn out good with the seminar tomorrow. I will talk to you about it then on our class. Good evening! __T. Nica__^^   I have a lab seminar tomorrow for paper review only in English. >>>CORRECT >>>OR The paper review that I will have at the lab seminar tomorrow is only in English. So I had stayed all night and I didn\'t have a time to take your call. >>>CORRECT >>> I didn\'t have time to asnwer you call because I stayed all night.Sorry about it. >>>CORRECT I am also writing this contents during business trip. >>>I\'m also writing this composition while on my way to my business trip.I think that smart phone is the best masterpiece because it is very useful and comprtable everywhere. >>>I think smart phone is the best phone ever invented because it\'s very useful and comfortable which you can use everywhere.I went to business trip with my professor. >>>I went with my professor on a business trip. He said with his smile, \"Sometimes take care when you study.\", and commented additionally, \"Study burning midnight oil. >>>He said with a smile \"Sometimes you take care when you study\", he also added \"Study by burning the midnight oil.\" I also burn the midnight oil.\" >>>CORRECT >>>I do burn the midnight oil.His comments were all right but it is paradox. >>>His comments were all right but it is a paradox. Anyway I am in the internet with my smart phone. >>>Anyway, I am using the internet with my smart phone. I am happy to be able to do internet outside. >>>I am happy that I can surf the internet anywhere.

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