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I have a lab seminar tomorrow for paper review only in English.
So I had stayed all night and I didn't have a time to take your call.
Sorry about it. I am also writing this contents during business trip.
I think that smart phone is the best masterpiece because it is very useful and comprtable everywhere.
I went to business trip with my professor. He said with his smile, "Sometimes take care when you study.", and commented additionally, "Study burning midnight oil. I also burn the midnight oil."
His comments were all right but it is paradox. Anyway I am in the internet with my smart phone. I am happy to be able to do internet outside.
강사 첨삭
Good day! Its really amazing how gadgets are bieng invented these days. It makes life easier, I hope that everything will turn out good with the seminar tomorrow. I will talk to you about it then on our class. Good evening!
__T. Nica__^^
I have a lab seminar tomorrow for paper review only in English.
>>>CORRECT
>>>OR The paper review that I will have at the lab seminar tomorrow is only in English. So I had stayed all night and I didn\'t have a time to take your call.
>>>CORRECT
>>> I didn\'t have time to asnwer you call because I stayed all night.Sorry about it.
>>>CORRECT
I am also writing this contents during business trip.
>>>I\'m also writing this composition while on my way to my business trip.I think that smart phone is the best masterpiece because it is very useful and comprtable everywhere.
>>>I think smart phone is the best phone ever invented because it\'s very useful and comfortable which you can use everywhere.I went to business trip with my professor.
>>>I went with my professor on a business trip.
He said with his smile, \"Sometimes take care when you study.\", and commented additionally, \"Study burning midnight oil.
>>>He said with a smile \"Sometimes you take care when you study\", he also added \"Study by burning the midnight oil.\"
I also burn the midnight oil.\"
>>>CORRECT
>>>I do burn the midnight oil.His comments were all right but it is paradox.
>>>His comments were all right but it is a paradox.
Anyway I am in the internet with my smart phone.
>>>Anyway, I am using the internet with my smart phone.
I am happy to be able to do internet outside.
>>>I am happy that I can surf the internet anywhere.
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