Paper 6
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Generally, a thick blistering layer is difficult to be detected by short and momentary heating because it has low thermal signals and gradually appear a defect zone after a long time since heating.
In this study, five thermographic images were saved according to the heating time and temperature rise of the specimen. From among these, locations and ranges of blistering zones were most clearly founded in the fifth thermographic image.
This study focused on drawing the temperature curve and establishing the critical temperature and the transitional zone of blistering zone. To do this, final image among the five thermographic images acquired earlier was selected for the quantitative modeling of the blistering zone.
This is because cause the blistering crack causes rapid temperature changes reacting more sensitively to the artificial thermal source.
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Generally, a thick blistering layer is difficult to be detected by short and momentary heating because it has low thermal signals and gradually appear a defect zone after a long time since heating. >> Generally, a thick blistering layer is difficult to be detected by short and momentary heating because it has low thermal signals and it gradually appears in a defect zone after a long time since heating. In this study, five thermographic images were saved according to the heating time and temperature rise of the specimen.
>> CORRECT!
From among these, locations and ranges of blistering zones were most clearly founded in the fifth thermographic image. >> CORRECT!This study focused on drawing the temperature curve and establishing the critical temperature and the transitional zone of blistering zone.
>> CORRECT!
To do this, final image among the five thermographic images acquired earlier was selected for the quantitative modeling of the blistering zone. >> CORRECT!This is because cause the blistering crack causes rapid temperature changes reacting more sensitively to the artificial thermal source.
>> This is caused by the blistering crack due to rapid temperature changes reacting more sensitively to the artificial thermal source.
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