Papplewick
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Papplewick is a prep s[이름]ol that I go to in England. Papplewick is a lovely place for education and even with socials, I have made lot of friends in Papplewick many good friends and friends is the most important thing in your life. First when I came to Papplewick I couldn't speak English but because I made friend I got better and better. Food in Papplewick is not very good, I think it's really bad but I still eat it. Papplewick is a very good s[이름]ol for sports, for exaple Rygby,Football,Cricket,Table tennis exc.
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Papplewick is a prep s[이름]ol that I go to in England.
>>Papplewick is a preparatory s[이름]ol that I have attended in England.
Papplewick is a lovely place for education and even with socials, I have made lot of friends in Papplewick many good friends and friends is the most important thing in your life.
>>Papplewick is a lovely s[이름]ol for education and even with the society. I had made a lot of good friends in Papplewick. Friends are the most important thing in our life.
First when I came to Papplewick I couldn\'t speak English but because I made friend I got better and better.
>>When I came to Papplewick, I couldn\'t speak English. But I got better when I met a lot of freinds.
Food in Papplewick is not very good, I think it\'s really bad but I still eat it.
>>Food in Papplewick is not very delicous, I think it\'s really bad but I still ate it.
Papplewick is a very good s[이름]ol for sports, for exaple Rygby,Football,Cricket,Table tennis exc.
>>Papplewick is a very good s[이름]ol for sports. For example, rugby, football, cricket or table tennis and many more.
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