Parent\'s Day
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Theme: [ESSAY] What is the significance of Parents\' Day?
It\'s about parent\'s thanking.
On parents\' day, childrean thank to their parents.
In my case, I gave them some small present and write them a card.
I like parents\' day!!!
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Theme: [ESSAY] What is the significance of Parents\' Day?
It\'s about parent\'s thanking.
>> It\'s the day when we give thanks to our parents.
>> or: It\'s the day when we thank our parents.
On parents\' day, childrean thank to their parents.
>> On parents\' day, children thank their parents.
In my case, I gave them some small present and write them a card.
>> In my case, I gave them some small presents and wrote them a card.
I like parents\' day!!!
>> CORRECT
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