Parental -Teacher conference

2018-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Do my kids speak in a sentence or just words? Do my kids become more attentive to the class than before? Soohyun have practiced calculation these days, and she can add or subtract three digits now. Do they seem to understand and concentrate more than before? I heard that some students in their class won the prize several times. Since my kids say I’ve never gotten any prize whenever their classmates get it. I wonder how they would make an effort to get it. For example, Soohyun seems to be talented in terms of art and she even got awards several times in Nationwide art contest. How do you assess the students for the prize candidate? Is it assessed by single session of art contest or ordinary grades during the semester? They are lacking their confidence due to their English proficiency, so I would like to encourage them to be confident. The most efficient way would be getting some prize what they like and try to be good.

강사 첨삭

Do my kids speak in a sentence or just words?
>> Correct
>> OR: Do my kids speak in sentences or phrases?

Do my kids become more attentive to the class than before?
>> Have my kids become more attentive in class than before?

Soohyun have practiced calculation these days, and she can add or subtract three digits now.
>> Soohyun is practicing calculation these days and she can add or subtract three digits now.

Do they seem to understand and concentrate more than before?
>> Correct
>> OR: Do they seem to understand lessons and concentrate during class discussions or activities more than before?

I heard that some students in their class won the prize several times.
>> Correct

Since my kids say I’ve never gotten any prize whenever their classmates get it.
>> My kids were telling me that their classmates received some prizes but they\'ve never receive any.

I wonder how they would make an effort to get it.
>> I wonder on how much effort they should make to get it.
>> OR: I\'m wondering on how they could make an effort to get it.

For example, Soohyun seems to be talented in terms of art and she even got awards several times in nationwide art contest.
>> For example, Soohyun seems to be talented in terms of arts and she even got awards several times in nationwide arts contests.

How do you assess the students for the prize candidate? Is it assessed by single session of art contest or ordinary grades during the semester?
>> What are the criteria that you follow in judging the winners. Is it assessed in a single session of art contest or \"ordinary\" grades during the semester? ( OR: is it based on your observations during regular class activities during the semester?)

They are lacking their confidence due to their English proficiency, so I would like to encourage them to be confident. The most efficient way would be getting some prize what they like and try to be good.
>> They lacked confidence due to their average English proficiency level, so I would like to encourage them to engage in as many school activities as they can to build their confidence.The most efficient way would be by getting some prizes for the activities they like.

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