Parental spanking of children should be a crime
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I do not agree. Many children do not listen to their parents when they scold them. However, I think corporal punishment enough to hurt a child becomes a crime.
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I do not agree.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I disagree.
Many children do not listen to their parents when they scold them.
>> CORRECT
However, I think corporal punishment enough to hurt a child becomes a crime.
>> However, I think corporal punishment enough to hurt a child is a crime.
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