Parenting skills!
학생이 쓴 원문
Women\'s and men\'s parenting skills differ on an emotional level. In the case of women, if they take care of their children like jewels, men love and cherish their children, but take care of them roughly. Women listen to children and are very helpful emotionally, but men are very helpful to children\'s physical development.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Women\'s and men\'s parenting skills differ on an emotional level.
>>> CORRECT!
In the case of women, if they take care of their children like jewels, men love and cherish their children, but take care of them roughly.
>>> CORRECT!
Women listen to children and are very helpful emotionally, but men are very helpful to children\'s physical development.
>>> CORRECT!
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