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2022-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Frankly speaking, I think parents of children who commit crimes, they should be liable for legally. We should have not only personal responsibility but also a social responsibility as parents.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Totally agree with you.  Responsibility and accountability starts at home on how parents taught their children.
Have a great weekend!
Aki~

Frankly speaking, I think parents of children who commit crimes, they should be liable for legally.
>>> Frankly speaking, I think parents of children who commit crimes, should be liable.
>>> Frankly speaking, I think parents should be liable for the crimes committed by their children.

We should have not only personal responsibility but also a social responsibility as parents
>>> We should not only have personal but also social responsibilities as parents.

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