Parents\' advice
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually agree with my parents\' advice, but I don\'t agree with it in my concern. Parents\' advice is very useful and safe in doing something. It is wise advice but they don\'t apprehend my mind. I usually follow their advice. However I think that not following advice makes parents worry, so sometimes I don\'t tell about my concern to them. In past, I did something without talking to my parents. After they knew it they worried about me and got angry about not discussing it. They said if I discussed it with them, they would approve it. But I can\'t believe it, and now I do my work without talking with parents. But it is obvious that parents advice is wise in many parts.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for making your homework.
Indeed, the wisdom of our parents are the best.
But I also agree that sometimes, we don\'t want them to worry so much so we try to hide some things to them.
~Teacher Gina
>> I usually agree with my parents\' advice, but I don\'t agree with it when it\'s my concern.
Parents\' advice is very useful and safe in doing something.
>> CORRECT.
It is wise advice but they don\'t apprehend my mind.
>> It is a wise advice but they don\'t apprehend my mind.
I usually follow their advice.
>> CORRECT.
However I think that not following advice makes parents worry, so sometimes I don\'t tell about my concern to them.
>> However, I think that not following their advice makes parent worry so sometimes I don\'t tell them about my concern.
In past, I did something without talking to my parents.
>> In the past, I did something without talking to my parents.
After they knew it they worried about me and got angry about not discussing it.
>> CORRECT.
They said if I discussed it with them, they would approve it.
>> CORRECT.
But I can\'t believe it, and now I do my work without talking with parents.
>> But I can\'t believe it, and now I do my work without talking with my parents.
But it is obvious that parents advice is wise in many parts.
>> But it is obvious that parents\' advice is wise in many parts.
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