Parents are the best teacher.

I agree that parents are thd best teachers to their children. There are several reasons why I agree it. Firstly, an education that children are given through their parents is very important because it influence their lifetime. When they were a child, if they were not given a good education, they can not have a nice persnality. Secondly, parents know very well their children more than others such as teachers, grandparents, cousins and so on. So, parents can know their children's advantages or disadvantages. It is very useful that developing advantages and making up for disadvantages. finally, children who are given a lot of love are doing well at school. It is the most important that parents love their children. Therefore, I think that parents can become a good teacher.

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