parents are the best teachers.
학생이 쓴 원문
It can be true or not.
the children imitate their parents.
so if the parents act in good ways, they can be the best teachers for their children.but sometimes the children don't want to follow what the parents say.
though,If the parents force their chilren to follow their ideas, even though they are right, they can be worst teachers.
so as how they raise their children , they can be a best teacher or not.
thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I agree with you. Parents are the ones who mold their children\'s personality. They should do their best in raising their children because whatever and whoever they become will reflect how good or bad their parents are.
T. JanE ^^
It can be true or not.>> Correct
the children imitate their parents.>> Children imitate their parents.
So if the parents act in good ways, they can be the best teachers for their children.
>> So if parents act in good ways, they can be the best teachers for their children.
But sometimes the children don\'t want to follow what the parents say.>> But sometimes, children don\'t want to follow what their parents say.
though,If the parents force their chilren to follow their ideas, even though they are right, they can be worst teachers.>> If parents force their children to follow their ideas, even though they are right, they can be the worst teachers.
so as how they raise their children , they can be a best teacher or not.>> So how they raise their children can make them the best teacher or otherwise.
thank you. >> Correct
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