Parents are the best teachers in our life.
학생이 쓴 원문
I definitely agree on the opinion that parents are the best teachers. We are growing up in an environment in which parents are.
Parents grow older than us, and they have more experience in life than us, so they have wisdom of life. They always give us advices in many aspects of life, and they make us to become a good person and help us to make better choices when we live in our life. Parents always want to teach best for us more than anyone else. They should be esteemed for their wisdom and experience of life.
Even if they are not the best teacher academically, they served as the best guide to make us to become a good person to live our life.
강사 첨삭
Hi June! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts as well. I definitely agree with you! Parents are the best teachers indeed. They mold us to become the person we are to be! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
We are growing up in an environment in which parents are.
>>We grow up in an environment which our parents have a lot of experience living in.
>>We grow up in an environment which our parents have a lot of experience living in.
Parents grow older than us, and they have more experience in life than us, so they have wisdom of life.
>>Parents grow older than us, and they have more experience in life than us, so they have wisdom about life.
They always give us advices in many aspects of life, and they make us to become a good person and help us to make better choices when we live in our life.
>>CORRECT
Parents always want to teach best for us more than anyone else.
>>Parents would always want the best for us than anyone else.
They should be esteemed for their wisdom and experience of life.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
Even if they are not the best teacher academically, they served as the best guide to make us to become a good person to live our life
>>CORRECT
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