Parents become good friends
학생이 쓴 원문
I think good parents is like be friends.
Being friend is more then teacher to children.
Children want their parents to know and understand.
I want my son think me friends
I try to understand my son as soon as possible.
But unfortunately. I fail in many times
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]!
I am happy that you were able to make this composition!
Thank you very much for sending this one.
I hope to read more from you next time.
Here are the corrections I made on your sentences.
See you later!
~ T. Giselle ^_^
I think good parents is like be friends.
>> I think good parents are like friends.Being friend is more then teacher to children.
>> Being a friend is bettern than being a teacher to children.Children want their parents to know and understand.
>> Correct.I want my son think me friends
>> I want my son to think of me as a friend.I try to understand my son as soon as possible.
>> I try to understand my son as often as possible.But unfortunately. I fail in many times
>> But unfortunately, I fail many times.
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