Parents become good friends

2013-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

I think good parents is like be friends. Being friend is more then teacher to children. Children want their parents to know and understand. I want my son think me friends I try to understand my son as soon as possible. But unfortunately. I fail in many times

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name]! I am happy that you were able to make this composition! Thank you very much for sending this one. I hope to read more from you next time. Here are the corrections I made on your sentences. See you later! ~ T. Giselle ^_^     I think good parents is like be friends. >> I think good parents are like friends.Being friend is more then teacher to children. >> Being a friend is bettern than being a teacher to children.Children want their parents to know and understand. >> Correct.I want my son think me friends >> I want my son to think of me as a friend.I try to understand my son as soon as possible. >> I try to understand my son as often as possible.But unfortunately. I fail in many times  >> But unfortunately, I fail many times.

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