parents need to be firm in disciplining their children?

2015-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I definitely think that parents need to be firm in discipline their child. Because these days the school teacher no more gives physical discipline to the students. So they are getting worse. Also, many home their parents are both do the work, so they don't have much time to care their child. Because of in this situation, child easily do the bad thing. And there are no one to try to say discipline to them. There are some cases, a man who walk around with his daughter, he saw some student smoking. So he said stop smoking, and then the student suddenly attack crucially that man. So he got serious injury. The kids had a big shock. But that students are not arrested. Because they are not adults. Even worse, the man sued from that student's parent to attack their child. He just tried to protect himself and his daughter. But the law said he did too much protection. After that case, all the Korean believe do not say anything to the child. So there is only parent who discipline to the child

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Hi, [이름]! (^^,) Disciplining a child is very important for his/her physical and mental well-being. Sometimes, parents feel guilty or worry that their child will be mad at them if they discipline them. Unfortunately, without the proper age-related discipline, a child may not gain the skills that he/she would later need in life. It is important to be a parent to a child, rather than be their friend. A parents\' main responsibility is not to ensure that their child experiences a happy childhood but rather make sure that their child is ready for adulthood. When children receive the necessary discipline, they will learn the skills they need in order to ba a responsible adult. I hope you are having a great day. Stay warm and safe [이름]. I\'ll see you again on Monday. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^^,) I definitely think that parents need to be firm in discipline their child. >> I definitely think parents need to be firm in discipline their child.Because these days the school teacher no more gives physical discipline to the students. >> These days, school teachers don\'t give physical discipline to their students anymore. So they are getting worse. >> That\'s why children nowadays are getting worse. Also, many home their parents are both do the work, so they don\'t have much time to care their child. >> Also, in most households, both parents in a family are working so they don\'t have much time to care for their child/children. Because of in this situation, child easily do the bad thing. >> Because of this situation, a child could easily be influenced to do bad things. And there are no one to try to say discipline to them. >> There\'s no one around to discipline them. There are some cases, a man who walk around with his daughter, he saw some student smoking. >> For example, there was a man who was walking around with his daughter and saw some student who were smoking. So he said stop smoking, and then the student suddenly attack crucially that man. >> He told the students to stop smoking and the students suddenly attacked the man. So he got serious injury. >> He got serious injuries. The kids had a big shock. >> The kids were shocked. But that students are not arrested. >> But the students who did that were not arrested. Because they are not adults. >> It\'s because they were not adults. Even worse, the man sued from that student\'s parent to attack their child. >> Worse, the man was sued by the parents of the children who attacked him.   He just tried to protect himself and his daughter. >> CORRECT! OR >> He was just trying to protect himself and his daughter. But the law said he did too much protection. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, the law said, he went over board. After that case, all the Korean believe do not say anything to the child. >> After that case, all Koreans now believe that it is not wise to interfere with other people\'s child/children. So there is only parent who discipline to the child >> That\'s why the parents are the only ones who are capable of disciplining their child/children.

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