Parents should be punished for their children’s mistakes.
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Disagree. children should be punished for what they did wrong and never do what they did again.
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Disagree.
>> I disagree.
children should be punished for what they did wrong and never do what they did again.
>> Children should be punished for their wrongdoings for them to stop doing them.
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