Paris is my dream country.
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Thanks for sharing your answers [이름]! Me too. I would also love to visit Paris. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
If I have a chance to travel other country, I’d like to visit Paris.
>> If I have a chance to travel TO other country, I’d like to visit Paris.
I’m interested in beauty cosmetic, art, culture and history of Europe.
>> CORRECT
France has famous brands of cosmetic and clothes.
>> France has famous brands of cosmeticS and clothes.
Also there is museum that has tons of historical artifacts.
>> Also, there is A museum that has tons of historical artifacts.
I already knew and saw some pieces of artifacts and paints in books and media.
>> CORRECT
If I see them in real, It’ll be impressed for me and I’m sure I couldn’t forget the moments forever.
>> If I see them in actual, I will be impressed and I’m sure I couldn’t forget the moments forever.
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