Park plan
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you always be careful and be safe
강사 첨삭
Hi Ye [이름]!
For this kind of test, the use of prepositions plays a big role.
Be careful of which prepositions would be appropriate for each situation.
Take note of the changes below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The given plans illustrate many facilities in Grange Park in both 1920 and today.
>> Correct
Through this
information, people can check the differences which have developed or changed between the plans.
>> Through this information, people can check the differences which have developed between the plans.
Overall, the location of the two entrances and the rose garden which was located on the north of the
stage for musicians have not changed.
>> Overall, the locations of the two entrances and the rose garden which was located on the northern part of the stage for musicians have not changed.
However, the southern rose garden has been moved to the place
where the fountain was in 1920.
>> Correct
Moreover, the four seats in 1920 have been moved to the next to the
rose garden which is located in the middle of Grange Park, removing the one which was on the east side
of the glasshouse.
>> Moreover, the four seats in 1920 have been moved around the rose garden which is located in the middle of Grange Park, removing the one which was on the east side of the glasshouse.
The stage for musicians has been replaced by the Amphitheatre for concerts and the
glasshouse has disappeared and replaced by a water feature in the same place.
>> The stage for musicians has been replaced by the Amphitheatre for concerts and the glasshouse has disappeared and replaced by a water feature at the same place.
Café and entrance for
the underground car park have appeared today.
>> A café and entrance for the underground car park have appeared today.
Lastly, the pond for water plants has replaced the
children’s play area.
>> Lastly, the pond for water plants has been replaced by the children’s play area.
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