Parliamentary election
학생이 쓴 원문
Next Wednesday is parliamentary election day.
So next Wednesday is holiday.
Korea is holiday but I\'m not.
Next Wednesday I have a lot of class in my academy.
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Oh that\'s a shame. I feel the same way actually.
Next Wednesday is parliamentary election day.
>> Next Wednesday is the parliamentary election day.
So next Wednesday is holiday.
>> So it will be a holiday by that time.
Korea is holiday but I\'m not.
>> The rest of South Korea will be on a holiday except me.
Next Wednesday I have a lot of class in my academy.
>> I will have a lot of classes during that day in the academy.
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