part 1

2011-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

The first part is here and the second part is the 28th July composition.Thank you Joey. <first part> I carefully listened to your presentation and enjoyed it very much. I had several chances to learn about corporation tax and personal income taxes of China by participating in some seminars, but little did I know of the development status of China's partnership system through long discussion and various regulations. I especially appreciate your systematic paper on the history and specific laws and ordinances of China's partnership, which I've never learned about. And I think this can be the first paper on the Chinese partnership taxation system introduced in Korea. In this regard, your treatise has its great significance.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections below. The first part is here and the second part is the 28th July composition.Thank you Joey.>> Correct.I carefully listened to your presentation and enjoyed it very much. >> Correct. I had several chances to learn about corporation tax and personal income taxes of China by participating in some seminars, but little did I know of the development status of China's partnership system through long discussion and various regulations. >> I had several chances to learn about Corporation Tax and Income Tax in China by attending some seminars, but little did I know of the development status of China's Partnership System through long discussion and various regulations.I especially appreciate your systematic paper on the history and specific laws and ordinances of China's partnership, which I've never learned about. >> Correct. And I think this can be the first paper on the Chinese partnership taxation system introduced in Korea. >> Correct. In this regard, your treatise has its great significance. >> In this regard, your treatise is of great significance.

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