part 1. practice

Hi there Raylieh~! Thanks for practicing the IELTS with me. Check my corrections below and consider them as well. Happy weekend ahead!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

1.
i\'m currently working as an Programming teacher in school.

>>>I\'m currently working as a programming teacher in school.
Im having fun in this job because I love children.
>>>I\'m having fun in this job because I love children.
2.
My major is electronic engineering so my job is quite related.
>>> CORRECT
3.
I want to do what I do well. 

>>> CORRECT

Plus I have a lot of hobbies so I need enough time to do it.

>>> CORRECT
So It should related to my major and balanced with my life.

>>>So, it should be related to my major and it would help balanced my life.

It\'s only things what I want of ideal job.
>>> It\'s the only thing I want for my ideal job.
4.
I think it depends on if I like the job or not.

>>> I think it depends on whether I like the job or not.
If I like the job the salary is not important, if not salary is very important.

>>>If I like the job the salary is not important, if not then salary is very important.
 Instead of not interested in work, I would like more rewards.
>>> Instead of not being interested in working, I would strive to get more rewards.
5.
When I was in university I solved a very hard Graduation thesis project.

>>>When I was in university I solved a very hard graduation thesis project.

>>>When I was in university I solved a laborious graduation thesis project.

I was try to handle it even if I study more hours.

>>>I tried to handle it even if I study for more hours.
 Nevertheless When I was caught in the middle of my research, I heard the advice of my professor and friends.

>>> When I was caught in the middle of my research, I listened to the advice of my professor and friends.
 As a result, I solved it.

>>> CORRECT

>>>OR: As a result, I was able to solve it.
 6.
im from Seoul, South Korea.
>>> I\'m from Seoul, South Korea.
7.
I live in Kang-dong of Seoul with my Family.

>>> I live in Kang-dong with my Family.