part 2

2013-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The cheese on these nachos isn't (melted, ) enough. 2. We have two domestic and two imported beers on (mild). 3. I'll take a gin and soda ( on the side). 4. Seniors get a (discount) on food, but not on liquor. 5. The reservation requested a (booth) if there's one available at seven I remember that the movie RED isn't released yet in your country. I think it will be released soon. I won't talk about the story about the movie because I want you to watch it yourself. I recommend you to watch it. of course don't use the internet down load. Suddenly the Question is occuring in my head. There are many Korean movies in theater, is your country releasing a Korean movie?? and I am curious about the story of your country's. what is the most famous film in these days? tell me about it. If I get a chance, I will watch the your country's To watching English movie I will do my best to studying English.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Great morning to you!^^

Thanks for sending your homework and composition.

It\'s been great checking your work.^^

And yeah maybe I can tell you something about Philippine movies in class, too^^...

See you later!

~~T. Nina^^

1. The cheese on these nachos isn\'t (melted, ) enough.
>>Correct!

2. We have two domestic and two imported beers on (mild).

>>draft
3. I\'ll take a gin and soda ( on the side).

>>on the rocks
4. Seniors get a (discount) on food, but not on liquor.

>>correct!
5. The reservation requested a (booth) if there\'s one available at seven
>>correct!
I remember that the movie RED isn\'t released yet in your country.

>>Correct!
I think it will be released soon.
>>Correct!

I won\'t talk about the story about the movie because I want you to watch it yourself.

>>I won\'t tell you the story of the movie because I want you to watch it yourself.
I recommend you to watch it. of course don\'t use the internet down load.
>>I recommend you to watch it but don\'t download it from the internet.^^.
Suddenly the Question is occuring in my head.

>>Suddenly, a question occurred in my mind.
There are many Korean movies in theater, is your country releasing a Korean movie??
>>There are many Korean movies in the theater. Is your country releasing Korean movies?
and I am curious about the story of your country\'s.
>>And I\'m curious about the story of your country.

what is the most famous film in these days?

>>What is the most famous film these days?
tell me about it.
>>Tell me about it.
If I get a chance, I will watch the your country\'s

>>If I get a chance, I will watch your country\'s movies.
To watching English movie I will do my best to studying English.

>>To watch English movies, I will do my best to study English.

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