Part of my weekend

2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1. If you are inexperienced, you shouldn't apply for this job. 2. Everybody thinks that John and his brother are unpleasant guys. 3. It's quite impossible to please her. 4. This was one of the most disorganized conferences I've ever participated in. 5. John and Mary are unseparable friends. I alread have eaten pizza last week, but We ate lunch for pizza which was made of crab flesh. We enjoyed our meal. I bought lunch for him. I had my hair cut. I was happy because of my hair style. The bus schedule was almost reached, we said farewell each other. and I took my bus to my workplace. I spend almost four hours reaching my room. I thought that I'll never use the bus when I go to hometown. but It was a great time for me to rest

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

Well you got 4/5 in you homework... not bad.^^

Here are some tips that I would like to share to you:

~~learn the words that are important to the subjects you are studying
~~learn the words that you read or hear again and again
~~learn the words that you know you will often want to use yourself

T. Nina^^

1. If you are inexperienced, you shouldn\'t apply for this job.

>>correct

 2. Everybody thinks that John and his brother are unpleasant guys.

>>correct

3. It\'s quite impossible to please her.

>>correct

4. This was one of the most disorganized conferences I\'ve ever participated in.

>>correct

5. John and Mary are unseparable friends.

>>inseparable 

I alread have eaten pizza last week,

>>I ate a slice/whole piece of pizza last week.

but We ate lunch for pizza which was made of crab flesh.

>>We ate a crab flesh pizza for lunch.

We enjoyed our meal.

>>correct

 I bought lunch for him.

>>correct

I had my hair cut.

>>I had a hair cut.

I was happy because of my hair style.

>>I am happy with my new hair style.

The bus schedule was almost reached, we said farewell each other.

>>It was time for the bus to leave when we said our farewells to each other.

and I took my bus to my workplace.

>>I took a bus near my workplace.

I spend almost four hours reaching my room.

>>I spend almost four hours of travel going to my room.

I thought that I\'ll never use the bus when I go to hometown.
>>I thought that I\'ll never use the bus when I go to my hometown.

but It was a great time for me to rest

>>But it was a great time for me to take a rest.

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