Part of my weekend
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강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Well you got 4/5 in you homework... not bad.^^
Here are some tips that I would like to share to you:
~~learn the words that are important to the subjects you are studying
~~learn the words that you read or hear again and again
~~learn the words that you know you will often want to use yourself
T. Nina^^
1. If you are inexperienced, you shouldn\'t apply for this job.
>>correct
2. Everybody thinks that John and his brother are unpleasant guys.
>>correct
3. It\'s quite impossible to please her.
>>correct
4. This was one of the most disorganized conferences I\'ve ever participated in.
>>correct
>>inseparable
I alread have eaten pizza last week,
>>I ate a slice/whole piece of pizza last week.
but We ate lunch for pizza which was made of crab flesh.
>>We ate a crab flesh pizza for lunch.
We enjoyed our meal.
>>correct
I bought lunch for him.
>>correct
I had my hair cut.
>>I had a hair cut.
I was happy because of my hair style.
>>I am happy with my new hair style.
The bus schedule was almost reached, we said farewell each other.
>>It was time for the bus to leave when we said our farewells to each other.
and I took my bus to my workplace.
>>I took a bus near my workplace.
I spend almost four hours reaching my room.
>>I spend almost four hours of travel going to my room.
>>I thought that I\'ll never use the bus when I go to my hometown.
but It was a great time for me to rest
>>But it was a great time for me to take a rest.
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