Part time job
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In my case, I do have another job as well as this job.
I have imported and sold watches since 5 months ago.
Seeing watches on the internet was one of my hobbies.
One day, I found that some watches were pretty cheaper thatn ones in Korea.
I decided to sell them in Korea.
At first, it didn't sell well.
But, as I found some way to sell them like registering them on the internet market and watch clubs,
watches sell well now at a rate of a couple of watches per week.
Using the profit, I pay for a phone class tuition fee and dates.
Though it is not big money , it is enough to be my pocket money.
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Thank you so much for dropping in your composition..
Its nice to know that you know how to handle and manage your money, I hope i could do that too..kkkk:D
Anyway, Ill call you again later my dear..
T.Cam
In my case, I do have another job as well as this job.
>>In my case, I do have another job aside from working in my company.I have imported and sold watches since 5 months ago.
>>Ive been importing and selling wathces 5 months ago.Seeing watches on the internet was one of my hobbies.
>>correct!One day, I found that some watches were pretty cheaper thatn ones in Korea.
>>correct!I decided to sell them in Korea.
>>correct!At first, it didn't sell well.
>>correct!But, as I found some way to sell them like registering them on the internet market and watch clubs,watches sell well now at a rate of a couple of watches per week.>>But, as I found some ways to sell them like registering them on the internet market and watch clubs,watches sell well now at a rate of a couple of watches per week.Using the profit, I pay for a phone class tuition fee and dates.
>>Using this profit, I payed for my phone class tution fees and dates.Though it is not big money , it is enough to be my pocket money.
>>Though its not a big money, I think its enough to use it as my pocket money.
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