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학생이 쓴 원문
•the least/the most attractive personality traits in a person?
I am attracted to people who develop themselves. It is people who are diligent, and responsible for their work. and someone I can learn from. // I don\'t feel attracted to people with lazy personality.
•compare you and your best friend’s?
My friend concentrates very well and does everything she planned than me. // I can compare clothes style with my friend. she prefers casual styles, but I like fe[이름]ine clothes.
•Where is the best / worst place to live?
The best place to live is Denmark, i think. I heard that the security is good and the happiness index is high. and I heard that Danish education is good, too. /Africa? I\'ve never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live when I saw the video about Africa. Traffic was chaotic, and security was bad.
•How would you compare today’s weather with yesterday?
It’s cloudy and little rainy today than yesterday. Yesterday’s weather is sunny and warm, but today is not…
강사 첨삭
Hi Kate!
I hope you can get comfortable with the expressions here.
We have a lot to practice later.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
the least/the most attractive personality traits in a person?
>> What are the least or the most attractive personality traits in a person?
I am attracted to people who develop themselves.
I am attracted to people who develop themselves.
>> Correct
It is people who are diligent, and responsible for their work. and someone I can learn from.
>> They are people who are diligent and responsible in their work and also people I can learn from.
I don\'t feel attracted to people with lazy personality.
>> I don\'t feel attracted to lazy people.
compare you and your best friend’s?
>> Can you compare you and your best friend’s personalities?
My friend concentrates very well and does everything she planned than me.
My friend concentrates very well and does everything she planned than me.
>> My friend concentrates very well and she sticks to her plans while I don\'t.
I can compare clothes style with my friend.
>> I can compare our personal styles as well.
she prefers casual styles, but I like fe[이름]ine clothes.
>> She has a more casual style while I prefer wearing fe[이름]ine clothes.
Where is the best / worst place to live?
Where is the best / worst place to live?
>> Correct
The best place to live is Denmark, i think.
The best place to live is Denmark, i think.
>> The best place to live is Denmark, I think.
I heard that the security is good and the happiness index is high.
>> I heard that it\'s very safe there and people are just generally happier compared to other places.
and I heard that Danish education is good, too.
>> I heard that Danish education is good too.
I\'ve never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live when I saw the video about Africa.
>> I\'ve never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live there when I saw a video about Africa.
Traffic was chaotic, and security was bad.
>> Correct
How would you compare today’s weather with yesterday?
How would you compare today’s weather with yesterday?
>> Correct
It’s cloudy and little rainy today than yesterday.
It’s cloudy and little rainy today than yesterday.
>> It’s cloudy and a little rainy today.
Yesterday’s weather is sunny and warm, but today is not…
>> However, yesterday’s weather was sunny and warm.
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