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When I slept, It was hard to sleep. I don't know why. finally I slept mid night, having tought " I should get up early". That concern is nothing. I always get up around 6 a.m I got up as usual. and I went to school where my toeic test are held. after finishing test, I ate lunch with my friends. I worried about score. but I feel extricated. the weather of Sunday is little hot rather than warm. so while I had been going to Jin-Ju, It was almost impossible to take a nap in the bus. but it's a nice weekend. because I spent time compactly Q1 - You must pay your phone _bill_. Q2 - Bus _fees_ are going up. Q3 - He had to pay a _fine_ for parking in a prohibited area. Q4 - Private school_fees_ are very expensive. Q5 - Most people leave a tip in restaurants. Q6 - I got a tax bill yesterday. Q7 - It cost a lot in lawyers' fares.

Hi there again [이름]^^ Thank you for sending me the next part of your composition.I really had an amazing time reading it. You were able to compose good sentences but please be careful with your verb tenses.I know you will be able to polish it in due time.Just strive harder and aim higher.Don\'t be scared to express yourself,I will be here to help you out.Have a great night!Sweet dreams.See you tomorrow!Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: When I slept, It was hard to sleep. >> It was hard for me to fall asleep. I don\'t know why. finally I slept mid night, having tought \" I should get up early\". >> I don\'t know why and finally I slept at midnight having thoughts that I should get up early.That concern is nothing. I always get up around 6 a.m >> That concern of mine is useless,I always get up at six o\'clock in the morning.I got up as usual. and I went to school where my toeic test are held. >> I got up and I went to school werhe my TOEIC exam was held.after finishing test, I ate lunch with my friends. >> After the test,I ate lunch with my friends.I worried about score. but I feel extricated. >> I was worried about my score but I felt extricated.the weather of Sunday is little hot rather than warm. >> The weather last Sunday was a bit hot rather than warm. OR >> Yesterday\'s weather was a bit hot.so while I had been going to Jin-Ju, It was almost impossible to take a nap in the bus. >> So while I was on my way to JKin-Ju,it was impossible tor me to take a nap in the bus. but it\'s a nice weekend. because I spent time compactly>> But I had a nice weekend because I spent my time consicely.Q1 - You must pay your phone _bill_. >> Correct!Q2 - Bus _fees_ are going up. >> fares Q3 - He had to pay a _fine_ for parking in a prohibited area. >> Correct!Q4 - Private school_fees_ are very expensive. >> Correct!Q5 - Most people leave a tip in restaurants. >> Correct!Q6 - I got a tax bill yesterday. >> Correct!Q7 - It cost a lot in lawyers\' fares. >> fees