party
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve never organized a party. If I organize a party,
I will prepare delicious foods and sweet deserts. And I will enjoy it with my guest.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Emily! I wish you could also invite me to this party someday. I really want to try your sweet desserts. -Faith-
I\'ve never organized a party.
>> CORRECT
If I organize a party, I will prepare delicious foods and sweet deserts.
>> If I organize a party, I will prepare delicious foods and sweet desserts.
OR If I had a chance to organize a party, I would prepare delectable foods and sweet desserts.
And I will enjoy it with my guest.
>> And, I will enjoy it with my guests.
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