Party
학생이 쓴 원문
We are going to have a party this weekend with my 6-1 friends,
Because we are going to go middle school next month
so we can't meet much.
I want to go back 6-1class with my friends.
But I think we have to grow up and lead the country.
And I like the school uniform.
I love it.
And I am going to meet a new friends in middle school.
kkkkkk-----
Time so fast so I don't like him.
BUt we can't stop him.
ummmmmmmmm.
HOw about you teacher????????
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Wow! It\'s wonderful to know that you will have some fun this weekend.
Just be careful, okay? I really hope you will have a fantastic weekend.
Anyway, I wrote down my corrections for you to check them out.
Thank you so much for writing.
Take care always and talk to you in class! :)
T. Kristel
We are going to have a party this weekend with my 6-1 friends,>>Correct!
Because we are going to go middle school next month so we can\'t meet much.
>>It is because we are going to middle school next month and we can\'t meet often.I want to go back 6-1class with my friends.
>>I want to go back to 6-1 class with my friends.But I think we have to grow up and lead the country.
>>Correct!And I like the school uniform.
>>Correct!I love it.
>>Correct!And I am going to meet a new friends in middle school.
>>And I am going to meet new friends in middle school.kkkkkk-----Time so fast so I don\'t like him.
>>DID YOU MEAN: Time goes by so fast and I don\'t like it.BUt we can\'t stop him.
>>But we can\'t stop it.ummmmmmmmm.HOw about you teacher????????
>>Correct!
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