passed
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!!!
We really need to put our best foot forward to achieve a goal in our life.
I know it will be a long process but if we don\'t give up....we can be happy and successful!!!!
Have a great day ahead!!!!
T. Jeny
Hi, teacher.
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My daughter Gachon University passed.
>>My daughter passed the test in Gachon University.
I received the news yesterday.
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We paid Entrance fee and Tuition fee today.
>>We paid the Entrance fee and Tuition fee today.
I`m having a happy time with my family.Today Lunar New year in Korea.
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My faimaly went to morther-in-law.
>>My family went to my mother-in-law\'s house.
After we had breakfast we went to in Jin hae morther house.
>>After having breakfast we went to Jin Hae mother\'s house.
Alltother gathered my sister and nephew .
>>My sister and nephew gathered together.
My younger sister running a coffee shop in Ma San.
>>My younger sister is running a coffee shop in Ma San.
The family gathered and went to the there in the afternoon.
>>My family gathered there in the afternoon.
There were many guests it was busy.
>>There were many guests and they were busy.
There are downtown area center.
>>The coffee shop is located at the center of the town.
We havd a good time and returned home.
>>We had a good time and returned home.
My nephew who came down Seoul goes up again late night.
>>My nephew who came down Seoul went up late at night again.
Have you good luck for a new year.
> May you have good luck for the new year.
Goodbye~^^
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