password

2011-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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If you want to use a computor in the class, you have to type password. Suddenly, my password couldn't operate the computor this morning. I typed many times, but the computor couldn't work. I asked a help to my co-woker and he called computor company and the technologist promised to visit my class. And then I realized that my password that I typed this morning was wrong. I always type the password every morning. I can't belive how can I make the mistake. I apolozied to the co-worker and then called to cancel the promise. Thank you for your advice, Jessica. I will try to read Harry Potter Series.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I really appreciate your writing. Thank you for your composition. Keep up the good work! If you want to use a computor in the class, you have to type password. >>If you want to use a computer in the class, you have to type the password.Suddenly, my password couldn't operate the computor this morning. >>Suddenly, my password couldn’t operate the computer this morning. >>OR: Suddenly, my password couldn’t access the computer this morning.I typed many times, but the computor couldn't work. >>I typed it many times, but I couldn’t access the computer.I asked a help to my co-woker and he called computor company and the technologist promised to visit my class. >>I asked help from my co-worker and he called the computer company, so the technologist promised to visit my class.And then I realized that my password that I typed this morning was wrong. >>And then I realized that the password that I typed this morning was wrong.I always type the password every morning. >>correctI can't belive how can I make the mistake. >>I can’t believe why I made that mistake.I apolozied to the co-worker and then called to cancel the promise.>>I apologized to my co-worker and then I called to the person who made the promise and cancelled it.Thank you for your advice, Jessica. >>correctI will try to read Harry Potter Series.^^ >>I will try to read the Harry Potter series.

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