past tense
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ good night ma'am.
It's eleven fifty five PM.
It's so late time, but i'm not tired.
This is good news that I adjusted to work.
I did homework by using the iphone.
I think that I'm living very convinience world.
but I have awared to decrease humanism and nature.
On today, I raise thinking, but I should stop to speak for our class.
See you morning~
1. He walked to school yesterday.
2. They did their homework last night.
3. You was lazy last week.
4. That woman bought a new book this morning.
5. The janitor cleaned the blackboard yesterday.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
You did a great job with your homework. Continue doing that and ewventually you will improve not just your speaking skills but also your writing skills.This really helps if you do it regularly. I was not able to talk to you today. Anyway, See you tomorrow!
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
Hi~ good night ma\'am.
>>Hi! Good Evening Ma'am.It\'s eleven fifty five PM.
>>Correct!It\'s so late time, but i\'m not tired.
>>It's late at night but, I'm not tired.This is good news that I adjusted to work.
>>This is good news because I have adjusted to work.I did homework by using the iphone.
>>I am doing my homeworkusing the iphone.I think that I\'m living very convinience world.
>>I think I am living in a convenient world.but I have awared to decrease humanism and nature.
>>But I am aware that I lost sight of nature and humanism.On today, I raise thinking, but I should stop to speak for our class.
>>Today, I was thinking, I need to speak up in class.See you morning~>>See you in the morning!1. He walked to school yesterday.
>>Correct!2. They did their homework last night.
>>Correct!3. You was lazy last week.
>>You were lazy last week.4. That woman bought a new book this morning.
>>Correct!5. The janitor cleaned the blackboard yesterday.
>>Correct!
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