Pastor Report 2
학생이 쓴 원문
I also have emailed congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis. I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and suffering from pain. I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needed. I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in online worship services as well as in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
I have sent birthday cards for all members to make them connected to the church.
Faith Development: I have delivered and taught Wesleyan theology through my sermons.
Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team from our congregation prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC. I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission program of Henderson UMC. New online platforms are a new way to connect with each other as a church.
강사 첨삭
I am also blessed by your writings, Han! May God bless you and your work abundantly! -Faith-
I also have emailed congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis. >> I would also email congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis.
I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and suffering from pain.
>> CORRECT
OR I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and afflicted brethren.
I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needed.
>> I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needy.
I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in online worship services as well as in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
>> I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in our online worship services as well as in our in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
I have sent birthday cards for all members to make them connected to the church.
I have sent birthday cards for all members to make them connected to the church.
>> I have sent birthday cards to all members to make them connected to the church.
Faith Development: I have delivered and taught Wesleyan theology through my sermons.
Faith Development: I have delivered and taught Wesleyan theology through my sermons.
>> CORRECT
Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team from our congregation prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC.
Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team from our congregation prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC.
>> Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team, which is from our congregation, prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC.
I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission program of Henderson UMC.
>> I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission programs of Henderson UMC.
New online platforms are a new way to connect with each other as a church.
>> CORRECT
OR We are bound together by these new online platforms.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.