Pastor visited my house
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^ :)
Wow! You had a very busy day because
you had a lot of visitors. :)
You were such a kind boy who entertained your visitors.
Your Pastor is very kind too I can tell. :)
Good luck on April 4. I want you to enjoy the trip.
See you in our class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today\'s morning was busy morning.
>>Today\'s morning was very busy.
Because my church\'s intelligent Pastor visited my house.
>> My intelligent pastor from our church visited my house.
He visited my house almost 12.
>> He visited at almost 12 noon.
I ran an errand to buy a snack for the customer.
>> I ran an errand to buy some snacks for the visitor.
I bought a snack, what\'s my mom\'s said.
>> I bought some snacks because my mom told me so.
But someone told me to buy cheaper one.
>> But, someone told me to buy the cheaper one.
It was a same brand and it is cheaper than previous and there is more snack than previous snack.
>> It was the same brand and it was cheaper than the previous ones. And, there were a lot of snacks.
And I change the snack.
>> And, I changed the snacks.
After my church\'s Pastor visited my house with 4people.
>> After my Pastor left the house, another four people came for a visit.
We preyed and Pastor said if I memorize something he will give some pocket moeny.
>> We prayed and my pastor sad that if I could memorized something, he would give me pocket money.
And I want to participate in April 4th travel.
>> And, I want to participate on April 4 for the travel.
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