patience

I went to the bank today afternoon. There are lots of people who are waitting for their line..At first I started reading books and I tryed to be patient. It was too boring, and I didn't do anything. I was losing my patience and then think about that why do i wait for my line for long time. I didn't find any alternative method instead of that way. I thought, when I was young I got lost easily so I really worried about that because It's not useful to me. Next I trued to read books to get out of my situation which related anger and how to reduce your anger like that. and I tried to follow their methods. I was getting better. I satisfied with my action. but today I almost lost my temper in my mind. Tried to think the books which i already read.

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