Peace for our child
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening^^
Many people are celebrating for this event and expecting a huge change between North and South Korea.
Let\'s hope that our Government will be able to pursue such peace in the Korean Peninsula.
Now, we are going to meet a historical event with which we can make a peace in peninsula, resolve it into resolution between north and south Korea.
>>Now we are making a great historical event where Korean Peninsula will have it\'s peace.
This year, we make a exact 100th ceremony for setting up interim government in Shanghai.
>>This year marks the 100th anniversary of the establishment of an interim government in Shanghai.
In President Moon\'s address, we make a great progress in democratic and economic progress from last 100 years.
>>In President Moon\'s address, we have made great progress in democracy and the economy over the past 100 years.
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