Peacock
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Hi Andrea
I agree peacock is beautiful bird.
Peacock feathers is very beautiful.
So I always surprise when I watching peacock.
And Peacocks is very mysterious when peacocks flying.
I also like parrot.
Because sometimes parrot is said.
It\'s very amazing.
So I like peacock and parrot.
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Hi Matthew! ^^
Andrea
I wasn\'t able to talked to you for three days already.
I hope you are okay.
Hope to talk to you on MOnday.
Andrea
I agree peacock is beautiful bird.
>> I agree that the peacock is the most beautiful bird.
Peacock feathers is very beautiful. So I always surprise when I watching peacock.
>> Peacock\'s feathers are very beautiful so I am surprised when I watch them.
And Peacocks is very mysterious when peacocks flying.
>> Peacocks are also very mysterious when they fly.
>> Peacocks are also very mysterious when they fly.
I also like parrot. Because sometimes parrot is said.
>> I also like parrots because they sometimes talk.
It\'s very amazing So I like peacock and parrot.
>> They are amazing so I like both parrots and peacocks.
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