People always forgot something as I think.

2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Forgetting is a essential factor in some way for our life. We cannot live wholly perfectly. Sometimes we forgot something and live with another thing. Now my home that is apartment is repairing in appearance aspect, I want to say the painting and maintenance. I often go out to exercise in the park which is near at home. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Wee!

Thanks for always doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Forgetting is a essential factor in some way for our life.
>> Being forgetful is human nature.

We cannot live wholly perfectly.
>> We cannot be perfect.

Sometimes we forgot something and live with another thing.
>> Sometimes, we forget some things.

Now my home that is apartment is repairing in appearance aspect, I want to say the painting and maintenance.
>> There\'s construction happening here in my apartment building. They are painting it.

I often go out to exercise in the park which is near at home.
>> I often go out to exercise in the park that is near my house.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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