People are changing their minds.

2010-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nicole

학생이 쓴 원문

Today's topic was about Koreans' changing mind. Korean society used to be conservative because it is made of only one blood line and they hadn't gotten many chances to meet other cultures. But, nowadays, many people can get information about what's going on abroad through Internet or media and go out of Korea. They are getting to have open mindness in many areas such as plastic surgery, life style, and treating their kids. For example, just 20 or 30 years ago, most of the parents thought their kids would take care of them when they retire but they started to more care about their lives and not to expect their children will support them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for your time to share your thought about our topic. Thank you for making this class interesting. See you tomorrow and have a great day. Nicole Today's topic was about Koreans' changing mind. >>correct Korean society used to be conservative because it is made of only one blood line and they hadn't gotten many chances to meet other cultures. >>Korean society used to be conservative because it is only made of one blood line and they don’t have any chance to meet other cultures. But, nowadays, many people can get information about what's going on abroad through Internet or media and go out of Korea. >>But nowadays, many people can get information through internet, media and by traveling. They are getting to have open mindness in many areas such as plastic surgery, life style, and treating their kids. >>As a result, they become open minded in many areas such as plastic surgery, adopting different lifestyle and different way in upbringing their kids. For example, just 20 or 30 years ago, most of the parents thought their kids would take care of them when they retire but they started to more care about their lives and not to expect their children will support them. >>For example, 20 or 30 years ago, most parents care more about their kids after retiring, however, parents nowadays care more about their lives and not expecting any support from their children.  

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