People are well to speak my language more than me.

2019-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I am brought up mostly in a closed room when I was young. All the people are well to salute to me and I am, too. The parent\'s days has gone for me not doing any celebration. I often go to stores and talk to clerk to buy something. At certain time, I came across the old man asking about the destination that he don\'t know. I answer him at a short comment. Then he go to the way he goes. That\'s all. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a great night.

Talk to you later. ☺

I am brought up mostly in a closed room when I was young.
>> I was brought up in a closed room when I was young.

All the people are well to salute to me and I am, too.
>> All the people salute me and I also do the same.

The parent\'s days has gone for me not doing any celebration.
>> The parents\' day is finished and we did not celebrate it.

I often go to stores and talk to clerk to buy something.
>> I often go to stores and talk to the clerk when I buy something.

At certain time, I came across the old man asking about the destination that he don\'t know.
>> At that time, I came across an old man asking about directions.

I answer him at a short comment.
>> I gave him a short answer.

Then he go to the way he goes.
>> Then, he went on his way.

That\'s all.
>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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