People can be too attached to their pets.

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The sentences you used here are a little bit vague.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Many people have pets.

>> Correct
Also, i had pets like gold fishes, turtles and hamsters.

>> I also had pets like goldfish, turtle and hamster.
Some people who have pets, particularly dogs and cats, can be attached to thier pets.

>> Some people who have pets, particularly dogs and cats, can be attached to their pets.

Pets are very helpful to people who have depression because pets give people to unconditional love.

>> Pets could be a big help to people who have depression because pets offer people unconditional love.
So, people can be attached to the pets because people can give them hurt.

>> There\'s a possibility for people to hurt their pets.
Many people who have pets say that pets are one of their family members.

>> Many pet owners say that their pets are one of their family members.
But loving pets is good to some extent, if people too attached to their pets, both pets and people become tired.

>> Loving pets is good to some extent but both people and pets can feel tired if there\'s too much attachment.
This is because pets can understand people’s language, so they can’t fullfill the expections of people.

>> Correct
So, people should try to protect the line and be a health person who can give unconditional love to thier pets.

>> That is why people shouldn\'t go overboard and just try to give their pets unconditional love.