People can\'t live only by bread.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think that the investment in the arts is a waste of money.
People can\'t live only by bread.
Of course, government money should be used first for the poor and needy.
However, in the world there will always be people who live a hard life.
Therefore, we should understand the balance between cultural life and basic life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I\'m wondering about your favorite art piece.
Let\'s talk about that in class tomorrow.
I know you can describe it in detail.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think that the investment in the arts is a waste of money.
>> I don\'t think that investment in the arts is a waste of money.
People can\'t live only by bread.
People can\'t live only by bread.
>> People can\'t live on bread alone.
Of course, government money should be used first for the poor and needy.
Of course, government money should be used first for the poor and needy.
>> Of course, government money should be used first for the poor and the needy.
However, in the world there will always be people who live a hard life.
However, in the world there will always be people who live a hard life.
>> However, in the world, there will always be people who live a hard life.
Therefore, we should understand the balance between cultural life and basic life.
Therefore, we should understand the balance between cultural life and basic life.
>> Correct
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