People compete in sport, games, the economy and many other areas of life. What is good and bad about
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Competition means to win or fight for the same purpose, but competition in good faith is progressive.
Competition in human society may be selfish, but it is aimed at reproduction in a competitive society, and without competition, productivity falls.
Competition is productive and vibrant as long as you can get the right balance.
Competition, on the other hand, tends to exclude what must be learned.
If you teach competition itself, you will only have goals without internal motivation.
My victory and joy become failure and misery to others.
Games and sports that I have to win only have the absoluteness of the individual ego close to the illusion.
In some ways, a playground that doesn\'t compete may be more fun.
Humans live in a social animal competition society.
Did you feel the joy of winning the competition?
It is people who become more greedy.
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>>Competition means to win or fight for the same purpose against another, but it can bring something good when done with good purpose.
Competition in human society may be selfish, but it is aimed at reproduction in a competitive society, and without competition, productivity falls.
Competition in human society may be selfish, but it is aimed at reproduction in a competitive society, and without competition, productivity falls.
>>Competition in human society may be selfish, but it helps to build a competitive society because without competition, productivity fails,
Competition is productive and vibrant as long as you can get the right balance.
Competition is productive and vibrant as long as you can get the right balance.
>>CORRECT!
Competition, on the other hand, tends to exclude what must be learned.
Competition, on the other hand, tends to exclude what must be learned.
>>CORRECT!
If you teach competition itself, you will only have goals without internal motivation.
If you teach competition itself, you will only have goals without internal motivation.
>>CORRECT!
My victory and joy become failure and misery to others.
My victory and joy become failure and misery to others.
>>CORRECT!
Games and sports that I have to win only have the absoluteness of the individual ego close to the illusion.
Games and sports that I have to win only have the absoluteness of the individual ego close to the illusion.
>>Games and sports that have to be won only contribute to an individual\'s ego which gives an illusion.
In some ways, a playground that doesn\'t compete may be more fun.
In some ways, a playground that doesn\'t compete may be more fun.
>>In some ways, a game without competition may be more fun.
Humans live in a social animal competition society.
Humans live in a social animal competition society.
>>Humans are social animals living in a competitive society.
Did you feel the joy of winning the competition?
Did you feel the joy of winning the competition?
>>CORRECT!
It is people who become more greedy.
It is people who become more greedy.
>>It happens to people who become more greedy.
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