People have their own ideas and preferences. In your case, what is your idea of a great first date?
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Well, even if I don\'t remember when it\'s the first date last time. Going to Lotte World is good idea. I used to do it with my ex, eex, eeex. :) There is a famous date place. And, I can try on uniforms during the date. It\'s called uniform date. Another thing is date around Han river. When the weather is nice, I used to go there with chicken and beer. I guess it\'s illegal so I can\'t do that anymore. Without those, watching movies, having dinner, sharing hobbies, etc. Doing something together is a great date. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, even if I don\'t remember when it\'s the first date last time.
>> Well, I even don\'t remember when was the last time I went for a first date.
Going to Lotte World is a good idea.
>> CORRECT!
I used to do it with my ex, eex, eeex. :)
>> I used to do it with my exes. :)
There is a famous date place.
>> There is a famous dating place in my country.
And, I can try on uniforms during the date.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s called uniform date.
>> CORRECT!
Another thing is a date around Han river.
>> CORRECT!
When the weather is nice, I used to go there with chicken and beer.
>> CORRECT!
I guess it\'s illegal so I can\'t do that anymore.
>> CORRECT!
Without those, watching movies, having dinner, sharing hobbies, etc. Doing something together is a great date. :)
>> CORRECT!
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