People interest in sports

As you can see from this graph, the majority of the sports people enjoyed increased gradually between 1985 and 2005. and the football reached the most popular sports followed by golf and swimming. However, there were quite significant differences in baseball and swimming. Even though the number of people enjoying baseball was the highest, it dropped sharply after 1995 and became the lowest in 2005. Another interesting aspect is swimming which showed a gradual decline until 1995 but began to increase considerably after that. In addition, the number of people enjoying skiing increased sharply after 2000. and the popularity of golf continued to increase every year. Therefore, we can assume that people became more interested in a variety of sports than before.

Hi Sophia!! ^_^ It was an interesting composition. I always enjoy reading all your composition. Keep it coming. ^_^ I provided corrections on your sentences. Please try to review it. Enjoy your day. Take care! ^_^       As you can see from this graph, the majority of the sports people enjoyed increased gradually between 1985 and 2005. >> Correct! and the football reached the most popular sports followed by golf and swimming. >> Football was the most popula sports followed by golf and swimming. However, there were quite significant differences in baseball and swimming. >> However, there was a significant difference in baseball and swimming. Even though the number of people enjoying baseball was the highest, it dropped sharply after 1995 and became the lowest in 2005. >> Correct! Another interesting aspect is swimming which showed a gradual decline until 1995 but began to increase considerably after that. >> Correct! In addition, the number of people enjoying skiing increased sharply after 2000. and the popularity of golf continued to increase every year. >> In addition, the number of people enjoying skiing increased sharply after 2000 and the popularity of golf continued to increase every year. Therefore, we can assume that people became more interested in a variety of sports than before. >> Therefore we can assume that people became more interested in variety of sports now than before.