People like the beach.
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do you think people like going to the beach?
- People like going to beach, Reason are as below.
1.We feel openhearted when we see the clear ocean.
2.We can enjoy water sports including snorkeling, sailing, diving, and of course surfing.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]! :)
People like going to beach, Reason are as below.
>>People like going to beach, reasons are below.
We feel openhearted when we see the clear ocean.
We feel openhearted when we see the clear ocean.
>>CORRECT!
We can enjoy water sports including snorkeling, sailing, diving, and of course surfing.
We can enjoy water sports including snorkeling, sailing, diving, and of course surfing.
>>CORRECT!
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