People live differently.
학생이 쓴 원문
Because people live differently. Even though they lived in the same house, Mom and Dad were born in different places and lived their own lives. Even people who are so close have different ways of thinking because they have different lives and ways.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Because people live differently.
>>> CORRECT!
Even though they lived in the same house, Mom and Dad were born in different places and lived their own lives.
>>> CORRECT!
Even people who are so close have different ways of thinking because they have different lives and ways.
>>> CORRECT!
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