People my age worry about the most {05/20}
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people of my age worry about the most is weight.
Because Covid-19 is making lots of confirmed case so the students have staied at home and don\'t do exercise.
In my case, I was 20 kg when I have winter vacation(about Jan) but now Is 27kg :D
So I ride a bike with my family and jump rope often but I have ate too much foods.
I want to be tall :D
Hoping Covid-19 finish : ( : l
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]! (^_^)
You\'re too young to worry about your weight.
It\'s okay to be a bit overweight since you\'re not yet in your puberty period. However, once you enter high school or college, that\'s the time you should focus more on your wellness because studying can be very stressful. Stress can greatly affect your weight, okay? ^-^
Thank you for answering your homework.
See you in our next class.
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I think people of my age worry about the most is weight.
>>> I think kids my age worry about weight the most.
Because Covid-19 is making lots of confirmed case so the students have staied at home and don\'t do exercise.
>>> It\'s because Covid-19 forces people to stay at home and they don\'t exercise anymore.
In my case, I was 20 kg when I have winter vacation(about Jan) but now Is 27kg :D
>>> In my case, I was 20 kg. last winter vacation and now my weight is 27 kg. :D
So I ride a bike with my family and jump rope often but I have ate too much foods.
>>> That\'s why I go biking/cycling with my family and do jump rope often, but I still eat a lot.
I want to be tall :D
>>> I also want to grow taller.
Hoping Covid-19 finish : ( : l>>> I am hoping for Covid-19 to be over. :(
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