people need something new.
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Hello [이름]!
Wow! I admire you for doing another homework.
Thank you so much I do agree with you.
I usually try new dishes because I don\'t enjoy the food if I already ate it a lot of times.
Good job. Your thoughts are great! Keep it up
Teacher Nina
People each have a favorite food.
>> Each person has a favorite food.
Of course I have too.
>> Did you mean: Of course, me too.
>> OR: Of course, I also have a food that I really love to eat.
but If there is the rule that people have to eat only one food, people would enjoy?
>> Did you mean: But if there is a rule that people have to only eat one kind of food, would people enjoy it?
even it is one\'s favorite food?
>> Even if it is their favorite food?
>> OR: Even if they really love it?
I think it isn\'t.
>> I think they wouldn\'t.
Many people want to experience something new.
>> Correct!
this logic is adjusted to food too.
>> Did you mean: This logic is also applicable to food.
people want to find another flavor.
>> Correct!
>> OR: People want to try new flavors.
when they get used to it, they want to another experience.
>> When they get used to it, they want to try another experience.
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