people need something new.

2014-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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People each have a favorite food. Of course I have too. but If there is the rule that people have to eat only one food, people would enjoy? even it is one's favorite food? I think it isn't. Many people want to experience something new. this logic is adjusted to food too. people want to find another flavor. when they get used to it, they want to another experience.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Wow! I admire you for doing another homework.

Thank you so much I do agree with you.

I usually try new dishes because I don\'t enjoy the food if I already ate it a lot of times.

Good job. Your thoughts are great! Keep it up

Teacher Nina

 

People each have a favorite food.

>> Each person has a favorite food.
Of course I have too.

>> Did you mean: Of course, me too.

>> OR: Of course, I also have a food that I really love to eat.
but If there is the rule that people have to eat only one food, people would enjoy?

>> Did you mean: But if there is a rule that people have to only eat one kind of food, would people enjoy it?

even it is one\'s favorite food?

>> Even if it is their favorite food?

>> OR: Even if they really love it?
I think it isn\'t.

>> I think they wouldn\'t.
Many people want to experience something new.

>> Correct!
this logic is adjusted to food too.

>> Did you mean: This logic is also applicable to food.
people want to find another flavor.

>> Correct!

>> OR: People want to try new flavors.
when they get used to it, they want to another experience.

>> When they get used to it, they want to try another experience.

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