People often forget something important.

2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

Nowadays people often forget about the good old ways. I want to forget. Forget everything. Sometimes I even forget my own phone number. This is the time of spring. In spring we tend to catch a cold easily. Take care. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee~!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great time ☺

Keep writing!

Nowadays people often forget about the good old ways.
>> People often forget about the good old ways nowadays.

I want to forget. Forget everything.
>> I want to forget everything.

Sometimes I even forget my own phone number.
>> Sometimes, I even forget my phone number.

This is the time of spring.
>> Spring is here.

In spring we tend to catch a cold easily. Take care.
>> We tend to easily catch a cold in spring. Take care.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> COIRRECT

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