people's habit of impulse buying -1

2016-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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It seems wise for us when people feel desire to buy some products, they should distinguish between somethings they really need and other things they don't need. Government also should make policies to regulate and improve the quality of the advertisement rather t[이름] feed inexhastible commercial campaing.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!^^


Subliminal advertising is a form of advertising where consumers are brainwashed to buy a product whether they need it or not. It\'s like hypnotism in a way.

If you have any questions about the correction, don\'t hesitate to ask. ^^


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==



It seems wise for us when people feel desire to buy some products, they should distinguish between somethings they really need and other things they don\'t need.
Government also should make policies to regulate and improve the quality of the advertisement rather t[이름] feed inexhastible commercial campaing.

>> Whenever we feel the desire to buy something, it would be wise for us to distinguish whether we really need these things or not. The government should also put into effect policies to regulate and improve the quality of advertisements rather t[이름] allowing the publishing of subliminal advertising.

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